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[zanzjan]

There's a new story up over at the Town Drunk, The Great Deeds of Payven Larum by Rod Santos. For a first story it's pretty darned entertaining. It suffers from some awkward spots and a flatness in the pacing, but it shows definite promise. Great opening line.

Anyhow, if you need a chuckle, it's worth your time.